Tuesday, April 22, 2014

Bridesmaids

After much browsing, I decided to edit the page of the film, "Bridesmaids" for my Wikipedia assignment. I have a lot of interest in the film and television industry, and thought editing a page on a groundbreaking show/film with women would be perfect for this assignment. Kristen Wiig is one of the most successful comedic actresses today, and the success of the film, "Bridesmaids" reflected the first (of hopefully many more to come) all-female cast to generate a huge box-office hit. It brought to attention that an all-female comedy can produce revenue for the studio, while pleasing audiences and critics alike. It was truly a big deal for women in comedy.

The "Bridesmaids" page was already appropriately filled in most of its aspects, but I thought it lacked emphasis on the significance of its success. They already had a "Critical Reception" section so I decided to edit and contribute to this portion of the page. Along with editing and slightly reformatting the existing section, I added a few more reviews on the film that highlighted the magnitude of its success. I wanted to specifically make it known that the film was one of the first of its kind, and how important it was to not only women in comedy, but the film industry as a whole. With the right qualities, female-driven comedies are more than capable of succeeding, just like their male counterparts. Women can be funny, and despite their minority presence in the industry, can write just as well.


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Editor name: esyim

In doing these edits, I found that despite doing this for a class assignment, it was rewarding to have ownership over something that could be seen by a countless number of people. I don’t suspect too many edits on my own edits, unless there were complications with citations. I think I emphasized information that was well known and thought of, which aligned with the flow of what was already there. Assuming that my edits won't be taken down, I had a sense of pride knowing that people are becoming more aware of the significance of this film because of my edits. I hope my contributions to this page promoted a positive image of women in the film industry, their capabilities, and the triumphs they will continue to achieve.


3 comments:

  1. I totally agree with that ownership feeling you got. Also, I absolutely adore the movie so its nice to have something on the wikipedia page that makes it clear how generation-defining the movie was. So thank you!

    Best,
    Cameron

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  2. Movie fans can be some of the toughest Wikipedia editors, so I am impressed that you made substantive changes to a popular page that stuck, so you were able to experience the feeling of ownership that Cameron describes. Of course, watch out for language that might seem to contradict the Wikipedia NPOV policy, such as "were falling over themselves," but overall very nice work (that is also well documented with screenshots).

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  3. I really appreciate your work highlighting the significance of this film for women in the comedy industry. These details sometimes get glazed over and the fact that you took initiative to add to an already developed page is impressive. Great work!

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